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ORIGINAL:

You can additionally create custom dashboards to display metrics about your custom applications, and display custom collections of metrics that you choose.

BETTER:

Additionally, you can create custom dashboards to display metrics about your custom applications, and display custom collections of metrics that you choose.

EXPLANATION:

“additionally create” is awkward. The sentence is simpler when the two words are not adjacent.

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